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Allegra ONeill left a review on A Long Morning
May 4, 2024 at 12:33 pm
A Very Relatable and Enjoyable Read!
  • 4.4

I really enjoyed reading this story! Jim is getting ready for an interview, a stress that I am all to familiar with, and the story details his thoughts and actions as he prepares. To start, he has more time to get ready than he would like, and the reader follows with Jim and he mentally and physically decides how and what to do with that time.

The detail in the story is one of its strengths, as I could clearly visualize what Jim is doing. I especially like the section where he is deciding what to do about his beard and the many steps he takes to get it how he wants it. It reminded me of what my husband does to get his beard trimmed and ready. I will say that a few sections were a bit too detailed and slightly repetitive, but overall, the story flowed really well!

When I got to the end, I smiled just as wide as I imagined Jim did. Great way to end the story!

Allegra ONeill left a review on Freddy’s New Life
March 23, 2024 at 2:10 pm
Very Interesting Plot! Suspenseful Read.
  • 4

I really liked the plot of this story! When I got to the end and read your explanation of what the “vehicle” was, I was shocked and impressed! This story would make a great longer piece as well. Very creative! Your writing is also captivating! I loved the pacing of this story and following the main character. I did see a few typos, which isn’t a big deal at all! Just something I would want someone to point out to me in my writing.

Allegra ONeill left a review on I Am Fire; I Am Tears
March 1, 2024 at 12:19 pm
Great fantasy read!
  • 4.3

I really enjoyed this story! The descriptions were fantastic!

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